Is this poetry?
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Is this poetry?
{click to hear Dylan T. read his poem}
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Is this poetry?
{click to see the original site}
YES, these are all poetry. So…
What is poetry?
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Day 2
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“Abandoned Farmhouse” by Ted Kooser
BY TED KOOSER



Words fall through me and always fool me and I can’t react
And games that never amount to more than they’re meant
Will play themselves outTake this sinking boat and point it home
We’ve still got time
Raise your hopeful voice you have a choice
You’ve made it nowFalling slowly eyes that know me and I can’t go back
Moods that take me and erase me and I’m painted black
You have suffered enough and warred with yourself
It’s time that you wonFalling slowly sing your melody
I’ll sing along
Catching tear drops in my hands
Only silence as it’s ending
Like we never had a chance
Do you have to make me feel like
There’s nothing left of me?
You can take everything I have
You can break everything I am
Like I’m made of glass
Like I’m made of paper
Go on and try to tear me down
I will be rising from the ground
Like a skyscraper
Like a skyscraper
As the smoke clears, I awaken
And untangle you from me
Would it make you feel better
To watch me while I bleed?
All my windows still are broken
But I’m standing on my feet
Go run, run, run
I’m gonna stay right here,
Watch you disappear
Go run, run, run
It’s a long way down
But I am closer to the clouds up here
HOW CAN YOU WRITE ABOUT SOMEONE YOU LOVE AND RESPECT? BY EXPLAINING THEIR POSITIVE QUALITIES THROUGH WHAT THEY DO. HERE IS A LOOK AT THE “FARMER POEM” FROM THE TOP OF THE PAGE. WHAT DO YOU NOTICE?
- simile
- metaphor
- personification
- alliteration
- rhyme
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God Made a Farmer
Paul Harvey
And on the 8th day
God looked down on his planned paradise
and said, “I need a caretaker!”
So, God made a farmer.
God said, “I need somebody
to get up before dawn and milk cows
and work all day in the fields, milk cows again, eat supper
and then go to town and stay past midnight at a meeting of the school board.
So, God made a farmer.
“I need somebody with strong arms.
Strong enough to rustle a calf, yet
gentle enough to deliver his own grandchild.
Somebody to call hogs, tame cantankerous machinery, come home hungry
and have to wait for lunch until his wife is done feeding
and visiting with the ladies
and telling them to be sure to come back real soon…and mean it.”
So, God made a farmer!
God said, “I need somebody that can shape an ax handle;
shoe a horse with a hunk of car tire;
make a harness out of hay wire, feed sacks and shoe scraps.
And who, at planting time and harvest season,
will finish his forty hour week by Tuesday noon.
Then, painin’ from “tractor back”, put in another seventy two hours.”
So, God made a farmer!
God had to have somebody willing to ride the ruts at double speed
to get the hay in ahead of the rain clouds
and yet stop on mid-field and race to help
when he sees the first smoke from a neighbor’s place.
So, God made a farmer!
God said, “I need somebody strong enough to clear trees, heave bails
and yet gentle enough to tame lambs and wean pigs
and tend the pink combed pullets…
and who will stop his mower for an hour to mend the broken leg of a meadow lark.”
So, God made a farmer!
It had to be somebody who’d plow deep and straight…
and not cut corners.
Somebody to seed and weed, feed and breed…
and rake and disc and plow and plant and tie the fleece and strain the milk.
Somebody to replenish the self-feeder
and then finish a hard days work with a five mile drive to church.
Somebody who’d bale a family together with the soft strong bonds of sharing,
who’d laugh and then sigh…
and then respond with smiling eyes,
when his son says he wants to spend his life
“doing what dad does”.
So, God made a farmer!
What an awesome collection. Very inspiring lesson. I may take parts and modify for my fourth grade GT class. Poetry is by far one of my favorite things to teach.
I’m glad you found it–in not sure how 🙂 The blog page is an easy place for me to compile the poems and vids I’m sharing with the kids. ENJOY.